You seem to have conducted research, but the analysis and interpretation of the architecture and representations is vague and unclear. I have re-examined your analysis and I still am unable make sense of it. “Zaha Hadid has used a really basic rectangular object form and has transformed it making it look exciting flowing well throughout the building.” You need to refine, elaborate and further unpack your interpretation. Why have the spaces been stacked and interlocked in a “jigsaw puzzle”? What is the relevance? From my understanding Hadid has stacked and overlapped the spaces to create varying solids and voids to accommodate for the range of galleries required to display the works. Another key design strategy you seemed to have overlooked is Hadid’s idea of the “urban carpet”, which rolls up from the street to draw people in and “make the art more accessible” to the public.
Overall the graphic design of the montage layout is aesthetically pleasing, but it does not explain the conceptual standpoint well.
Unsatisfactory detailing of digital model. Inappropriately applied of textures. UVW mapping has not been applied. Stone / brick textures seem irrelevant to the design.
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ReplyDeleteYou seem to have conducted research, but the analysis and interpretation of the architecture and representations is vague and unclear. I have re-examined your analysis and I still am unable make sense of it.
“Zaha Hadid has used a really basic rectangular object form and has transformed it making it look exciting flowing well throughout the building.” You need to refine, elaborate and further unpack your interpretation. Why have the spaces been stacked and interlocked in a “jigsaw puzzle”? What is the relevance? From my understanding Hadid has stacked and overlapped the spaces to create varying solids and voids to accommodate for the range of galleries required to display the works. Another key design strategy you seemed to have overlooked is Hadid’s idea of the “urban carpet”, which rolls up from the street to draw people in and “make the art more accessible” to the public.
Overall the graphic design of the montage layout is aesthetically pleasing, but it does not explain the conceptual standpoint well.
Unsatisfactory detailing of digital model. Inappropriately applied of textures. UVW mapping has not been applied. Stone / brick textures seem irrelevant to the design.